its awesome that you family was able to make it here, and provide a strong family life and many options for you to be able to get an education and better your life.
I feel that the picture meshed very well with the poem. I dont know your voice yet but rather then seeming like a poem I heard it as a sincere internal monologue, I really enjoyed it
So yours is the longest poem I've read so far, but i LOVED everything you said. It sounds so like me with the self doubt and overthinking. It sounds like you have a very interesting life!!
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It's interesting that you are from New York. I've always wanted to visit. Good luck climbng to the top of the pyrimid!
its awesome that you family was able to make it here, and provide a strong family life and many options for you to be able to get an education and better your life.
Love that you are from New York! I have always wanted to visit, and the culture you bring to the classroom is pretty awesome!
I feel that the picture meshed very well with the poem. I dont know your voice yet but rather then seeming like a poem I heard it as a sincere internal monologue, I really enjoyed it
I love the last stanza of your poem!
This speaks to determination and hard work! You are on the road to success, keep it up and you will go very far in life.
So yours is the longest poem I've read so far, but i LOVED everything you said. It sounds so like me with the self doubt and overthinking. It sounds like you have a very interesting life!!
I know how you feel trying to live up to an older sibling! Not easy or fun!
Your successes will give you the self confidence to stay true to yourself and you are lucky to have a tight family. I like your post.
You are a very well rounded woman! I know that if you have the attitude you convey through this poem you will do great things! :)
New York!? Gahh.. I've always wanted to go there! And your picture is beautiful! 3 very strong women! Proud of you and wish you the best of luck (:
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