Loved how you thymed throughout the poem. I was wanting to do that but I realized I didn't have enough patience :), and it probably wouldn't have made much sense. Good job
I can really relate to a hard start at life and wanting to better yourself. This is my favorite poem that I've read thus far. Also the image is awesome where did you get it?
I really really like your poem. By far the best one I've read! You rhymed throughout which is awesome and to repeat what someone said above, I would not have had the patience to do.
Your poem was amazing. I loved how you put your true self out there in the open. Like me you have had your struggles but you are leaning on new things and family to get you through.
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Loved how you thymed throughout the poem. I was wanting to do that but I realized I didn't have enough patience :), and it probably wouldn't have made much sense. Good job
awesome poem very creative the picture is very awesome
I can really relate to a hard start at life and wanting to better yourself. This is my favorite poem that I've read thus far. Also the image is awesome where did you get it?
Thank you all for the compliments. Kody, I searched day and night pictures and this was one of them.
This is a great poem about personal triumph and you did a fantastic job!
I really really like your poem. By far the best one I've read! You rhymed throughout which is awesome and to repeat what someone said above, I would not have had the patience to do.
Your poem was amazing. I loved how you put your true self out there in the open. Like me you have had your struggles but you are leaning on new things and family to get you through.
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