well i was born in cali. most my family lives there called porterville small town, like the poem simple an sweet
The poem has great rhythm it flows and your choice of words paint a great picture without cluttering the poem with excessive detail.
I like the simplicity of it as well as the picture. A very 'clean' poem.
Short and sweet!
Your poem was good! It was short and to the point! It also sounds like you love tortillas, I do too!
You definitely like tortillas, haha! Nothing wrong with that. The picture was perfect and I like that your poem was "short and sweet"!
You must really like tortillas! Haha short and sweet, also gotta love Springfield Public Schools!
I had a friend whos mother would actually add masonry to the tortillas... well drywall, she said it helped the food stick to us. Dont put masonry in your tortillas.
I like your poem. I dream of Cali!
Very well put together! I'd miss California! I feel like it has a whole lot more to offer, than Missouri!
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well i was born in cali. most my family lives there called porterville small town, like the poem simple an sweet
The poem has great rhythm it flows and your choice of words paint a great picture without cluttering the poem with excessive detail.
I like the simplicity of it as well as the picture. A very 'clean' poem.
Short and sweet!
Your poem was good! It was short and to the point! It also sounds like you love tortillas, I do too!
You definitely like tortillas, haha! Nothing wrong with that. The picture was perfect and I like that your poem was "short and sweet"!
You must really like tortillas! Haha short and sweet, also gotta love Springfield Public Schools!
I had a friend whos mother would actually add masonry to the tortillas... well drywall, she said it helped the food stick to us. Dont put masonry in your tortillas.
I like your poem. I dream of Cali!
Very well put together! I'd miss California! I feel like it has a whole lot more to offer, than Missouri!
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